Tradewinds Brief Services
Samples
Real output from our own process, run on demonstration manuscripts we wrote for testing.
- Sample: Manuscript Integrity ReportThe Cartographer’s Debt (demonstration manuscript, about 5,700 words). Checked and approved by Albert Massay.
- Sample: report appendix, every finding locationDelivered with every report, so no location is ever left out.
- Sample: Book Listing PackageThe Cartographer’s Debt (demonstration manuscript). Rehearsal sample.
- Sample: Opening-chapter reviewThe Cartographer’s Debt, Prologue and Chapter One (about 1,300 words). Rehearsal sample.
- Sample: Book-description rewriteThe Cartographer’s Debt. Before and after, with what changed. Rehearsal sample.
These samples come from a delivery rehearsal. The Cartographer’s Debt is a short demonstration manuscript we wrote ourselves and seeded with known defects, so you can compare what was planted with what the audit found. It is not a client’s book and is not connected to any published author.
How this sample was produced. The checks ran exactly as they do for a paid audit. Albert Massay then checked all 14 findings against the manuscript and approved the report, as he does for every customer report. The Book Listing Package, opening-chapter review and description-rewrite samples are rehearsal drafts and are labelled as such. The short-manuscript audit ($49) produces exactly the same report as the full audit, so the integrity-report sample covers both.